unioctopegacorn's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fine Ass]

the torso is decent for the most part. Her right arm is a bit screwy, her shoulder was put too far back, and her arm is too thin/ short. Her hand is also really small, for future reference, the hand (when the fingers are open) is slightly larger than the face, and (when the arm is at it's side) should be able to reach half-way down the thigh. Also, I get that it's more of an anime style, but her right eye should be closer to the center of her face. Consider using construction lines when creating the upper and lower torso so that you can better tell how they connect, I say this because you have a section between her rib-cage and hips that doesn't really exist, the hips more or less start at the bottom of the sides of the rib-cage, sometimes a bit higher. despite the few issues, you're definitely headed in the right direction!

https://66.media.tumblr.com/17ee247682b0086a4b3b0f58e72c420e/tumblr_mnphwa6E9M1s5f7mgo1_1280.jpg

http://img00.deviantart.net/1506/i/2015/340/2/c/female_body_study_by_tigrobobr-d9j7oyk.jpg

VaporNinja responds:

Thanks again!

[Cayrah]

Why is her right breast larger than her left one if her left one is closer to the viewer? The background is also pretty meh except for the one light that has an awful lot of detail by comparison, and it kind of draws the viewer's attention away. Otherwise it's pretty boring but pretty nice.

[Birthday!]

I like the color palette, think about using colors other than just black for the line-work like a red-ish brown or some other color that fits into this spectrum, so that it compliments your already great colors. but otherwise, pretty simplistic, but very appealing.

Bbycheese responds:

thank you for the advice!

[Back from my Trip]

I like the face, it's very funny, and the line-work is smooth. It would be nice if you added values to the hair so that it isn't just black. Also, the back of his hand is perpendicular to the viewer, when it should be on the paper he's holding. I also think this type of cartoon could benefit from line-weight variation so that you can emphasize things like his expression, or his arm, which is closest to the viewer.

VaporNinja responds:

Thanks! I wasn't really trying with this picture. It was just a quick sketch I made just for that blog I posted on my instagram lol. But thanks anyways. It's kinda hard to make values for my hair just cuz it really is just a minature afro. I shortened it a bit in this drawing though.

[snow]

This would be pretty good if you changed around a few small things. You mostly only see rain when there is something bright highlights it, and snow when something dark is behind it, whatever these specks are they're very thin, long and blurry, so I can only assume it's rain, either way, by covering the entire piece in this rain effect, it looks really blurry. if you had a stronger point of light, you could add more details to the branches of the trees (thereby creating bright spots in the painting for you to show the rain). I also think it would look better if the ground was more varied; right now the ground is just a gradient, and the trees aren't really creating cast shadows on it. But if you made the sides of the road dirt or something, you would not only make it look more realistic, you'd also draw the viewer's attention to the center of the painting, at the end of the road (which could look very cool). Like I said, the changes would be very small, but it would really finalize an already good piece

Everratic responds:

This is a great review! I'll keep these points in mind when I make my next piece. I'll probably make a similar painting so I can try implementing your suggestions. Thank you.

[Empty]

her shoulder looks a bit off, women's shoulders are more slanted than men's, and even most petite men's shoulders aren't that broad, and that straight. Based on her hair, and the parts in it, it looks like her head is faced to her left, but their facial features are more or less facing forward. Also, her neck is a little too large. I like the color palette though.

[Makeda of Kush]

You should work on your anatomy. The way her upper torso connects to her lower torso isn't quite right. Also, her head is pointed to her left, but her face was drawn facing foreward

[Christobal]

really good, i like the comic style mixed with your own cartoon style, good use of coloring and shading, which is easy see in the forehead. I also like the texture of the hair. VERY COOL
btw i love the aviators

Angry-Hatter responds:

Thanks for the nice comment! Glad you like it!