unioctopegacorn's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cayrah]

Why is her right breast larger than her left one if her left one is closer to the viewer? The background is also pretty meh except for the one light that has an awful lot of detail by comparison, and it kind of draws the viewer's attention away. Otherwise it's pretty boring but pretty nice.

[Birthday!]

I like the color palette, think about using colors other than just black for the line-work like a red-ish brown or some other color that fits into this spectrum, so that it compliments your already great colors. but otherwise, pretty simplistic, but very appealing.

Bbycheese responds:

thank you for the advice!

[snow]

This would be pretty good if you changed around a few small things. You mostly only see rain when there is something bright highlights it, and snow when something dark is behind it, whatever these specks are they're very thin, long and blurry, so I can only assume it's rain, either way, by covering the entire piece in this rain effect, it looks really blurry. if you had a stronger point of light, you could add more details to the branches of the trees (thereby creating bright spots in the painting for you to show the rain). I also think it would look better if the ground was more varied; right now the ground is just a gradient, and the trees aren't really creating cast shadows on it. But if you made the sides of the road dirt or something, you would not only make it look more realistic, you'd also draw the viewer's attention to the center of the painting, at the end of the road (which could look very cool). Like I said, the changes would be very small, but it would really finalize an already good piece

Everratic responds:

This is a great review! I'll keep these points in mind when I make my next piece. I'll probably make a similar painting so I can try implementing your suggestions. Thank you.

[Empty]

her shoulder looks a bit off, women's shoulders are more slanted than men's, and even most petite men's shoulders aren't that broad, and that straight. Based on her hair, and the parts in it, it looks like her head is faced to her left, but their facial features are more or less facing forward. Also, her neck is a little too large. I like the color palette though.

[Makeda of Kush]

You should work on your anatomy. The way her upper torso connects to her lower torso isn't quite right. Also, her head is pointed to her left, but her face was drawn facing foreward

[Christobal]

really good, i like the comic style mixed with your own cartoon style, good use of coloring and shading, which is easy see in the forehead. I also like the texture of the hair. VERY COOL
btw i love the aviators

Angry-Hatter responds:

Thanks for the nice comment! Glad you like it!